Oh, wow, this is amazing! Normally when I try reading "the boys know about fandom" fics I end up clicking the back button almost immediately, but this was just really different. (Warning: Now entering full on tinhat mode) I think what held my attention was your EXCELLENT characterization, especially Jared's. His freaked out initial reactions to the whole J2 thing were very believable. I also really enjoyed that sort of surreal moment in the middle where he was having trouble separating fic!Jensen from real Jensen. I mean, if there were tomes of stories written about my life and friends and I started spending all my time reading them, I'd probably have some kind of existential crisis, so yeah. Your characterizations of the fangirls were also awesome. I especially enjoyed Rachel and I really, really wish Sandy were my roommate because she seems like such a sweetheart and then Jared would come visit all the time.
My favorite, FAVORITE thing was chapter 8. I have a feeling you know what I'm talking about when I say I've read a lot of porn. Hell, I've written a lot of porn. And I have never encountered a scene quite like the one you wrote. It was so full of joy and that's something I've just never seen before. Not that I haven't read happy sex scenes, because I have, but this was something out of the ordinary. What I love so much is that even though it was definitely hot, the sex itself was secondary and complimentary to the love and how HAPPY they are to finally be together and it just made me deeply squeeful. Andthistotallyhappenedinreallifeiswerz!!!!11!
Anyway, I seem to have written you a novel of a comment. Couldn't be helped. You are made of win! \o/
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My favorite, FAVORITE thing was chapter 8. I have a feeling you know what I'm talking about when I say I've read a lot of porn. Hell, I've written a lot of porn. And I have never encountered a scene quite like the one you wrote. It was so full of joy and that's something I've just never seen before. Not that I haven't read happy sex scenes, because I have, but this was something out of the ordinary. What I love so much is that even though it was definitely hot, the sex itself was secondary and complimentary to the love and how HAPPY they are to finally be together and it just made me deeply squeeful. Andthistotallyhappenedinreallifeiswerz!!!!11!
Anyway, I seem to have written you a novel of a comment. Couldn't be helped. You are made of win! \o/